Week 5 - Composition and Narrative

Developing ideas

Improvements that can be made

• It's a bit bright and lacks the mystical mood I am aiming for. 
• The Crystal don't stand out enough 
• Lighting effects? 
• Aliens..definitely needs Aliens 
• More Glow

• Uneven lighting effect doesn't work too well 
• But the contrast looks better 
• Washes away the effect of a floating city due to the loss of clouds 

• Crystals look too cartoony and out of place. 
• Water isn't obvious enough. 
• Fish aren't obvious. 
• Too dark. 
• More Trees 
• Colour correction 
• More stars 
• Different Lighting effects and overlaying textures.